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First and last wish (working)
In every last poet's vision
sighs an audible sigh a sigh,
confesses life's quiet ambition
to fly the corner of the sky.
To glide across the heavens,
to ride the breeze's flow,
just to catch a grander glimpse
of his dearest home below.
First and last wish (working)
In every last poet's vision
sighs an audible sigh a sigh,
confesses life's quiet ambition
to fly the corner of the sky.
To glide across the heavens,
To ride the breeze's flow,
just to catch a grander glimpse
Of his dearest home below.
First and last wish (working)
In every last poet's vision
sighs an audible sigh a sigh,
confesses life's quiet ambition
to fly the corner of the sky.