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A Song in the plumb garden
Hair like waves in a painting
Rounds her face and lengthens her neck
She reaches out
to the blanket of stars
seeking guidance to continue
A Song in the plumb garden
Hair like waves in a painting <br />Rounds her face and lengthens her neck
She reaches out
to the blanket of stars
seeking guidance to continue
A Song in the plumb garden
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A Song in the plumb garden
A Song in the plumb garden
Hair like waves in a painting
rounds her face and lengthens her neck
Lorsque tu passes la main dans tes cheveux
Engrosse la fureur des dieux
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Hair like waves in a painting
rounds her face and lengthens her neck
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Hair like waves in a painting
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